Astound,
fluctuant tear,
feathers lightly, kiss placed
upon white snowdrop, admire warmth
passion
Author notes
2.4.6.8.2
I love this form
A contest entry
- whiter words by Nicolette.
1500 points, ended November 20, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love this poetry form too and I love flowers in poetry...so here you have two of my favourite things!! And I have to agree with Lyndon about God painting the most beautifully in white.
A lovely cinquain - thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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The bloom looks so innocent in its beauty and you captured it wonderfully with such emotion. very very beautiful
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Your words are almost as beautiful as what God has created in this flower....Imagery is alive..and most magnificent!
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Thank you flowers are so beautiful, I don't like them in a vase, I love to grow them so I can see them in my garden, Smell their beautiful perfume, I am so glad you enjoyed this poem thank you so much your comment is very beautiful.
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liked it
it comes alive well done
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beautiful descriptive words...lovely piece
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Wow, this is a great poem, you really do well with this type of contest, just a hint of feather snowfly, blesssings with love John
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Beautiful.
You have convinced me that God never paints so beautifully as when He paints in white.
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Thank you, your comment means so much.
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