You would wait for me at the hill,
and could figure out that it was real,
the first kiss that made my honey spill,
right into your lips while everything stood still,
and the wind whispered the sweetest secrets,
love birds showed the tenderest precepts,
and i stayed locked into your arms riding tight,
you were the best angel and it felt so right,
so many roses around us with sweet scent,
we kissed and touched for the time that we spent,
and now you run into my veins like rivers,
you still touch me and my body shivers,
i still ride with roses all around me while we kiss,
and become even sweeter than what we reminisce,
its precious more each day,
so the setting sun shines when we play,
your soft fingers like roses makes me feel okay.
A contest entry
- Delightful Prompt Contest. by delightfulmess.
700 points, ended November 25, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
can you see an angel when u read this?
Comments
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I miss young love.
Sigh....
This was sweet and romantic. A beautiful
take on the prompt
Thank you for entering my contest
Delila -
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thankz
well, its nice to see that you have noticed it, its nice to have nice people like you.
i miss young love too.
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Such is young love. I am smiling
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am your soldier
love is war
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