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White

Mixing
together two
colours will make a third,
but no colours, when mixed,  ever
made white.

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  • Nicolette gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    A very informative and educational cinquain and although I was tempted to say I wish you'd chosen a different title, on reading the cinquain I understand why you just said "white".

    And so happy to see someone else writing "colours" as it should be written/spelled, lol. Thank you so much for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Lyndon gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    True. Black is not a colour!

    Your Cinquain is a lesson in Physics or Art.
    I enjoyed it. It is memorable.
    Best wishes. Lyndon.


    • Shenton silver member
      November 15, 2008
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      Lyndon

      Thankyou for your comments which are very much appreciated; and for your very generous applause. You're up late!

      Best wishes from W. A. I'm just off to bed

      Shenton


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    ah, that is so true...good luck ~


    • Shenton silver member
      November 15, 2008
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      CathrynAnn

      Thankyou for your comment and good wishes.

      Best regards from 'down-under'.

      Shenton


  • suseann
    November 14, 2008
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    Well constructed Cinquain.Sublime witty.


    • Shenton silver member
      November 14, 2008
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      suseann

      Thankyou for reading, for your words of praise, and for your very gererous applause.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton


  • Entwining Beauty
    November 14, 2008
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    Excellent poem, good luck in the contest


    • Shenton silver member
      November 14, 2008
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      E B

      Thankyou for your comments and for your very generous applause.

      With best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton

      I see from your profile that you're English. From whence do you hail? I was born in St Helens, Lancs but have been an Aussie since migrating here to Perth, in Western Australia, in 1957.

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