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Comedy Capers & Crusaders



with eyes wide opened
I listened to perverted
reality flowing freely
from fingers

you thought yourself
a king of comedy,
the master of pillage
and plunder of minds
bodies and souls

bent truths
for the benefit
of yourself and crew

thinking you
had right of passage
across seas and space

I fear not being
the punch line
in your repertoire

for while I entertained
your warped mind,
I kept others
from being bit players

in your game of charades



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I am not a joke, but may be a fool...

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  • Cannonsfire
    November 14, 2008

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    I was always fascinated by the caribbean and the romance of the seven seas but now I just think about all them sharks C


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    This is so good! A very tactfully written 'tell off' Very impressive. Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    November 14, 2008

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    truly excellent sis!!!! I hope that you and sissy cannonsfire will both be feeling better soon!!!! I love you!!