Looking back, on days of innocence;
when hearing sweet voice,
could raise hair on back of my neck;
causing blood to flow throughout body;
would've brought embarrasment
had I stood.
When falling into gorgeous eyes
could make heart race
in anticipation of simple kiss.
Back in the day,
when being close to this
Heavenly Angel;
always started daydreams.
The mind ran about,
with all kinds of thought;
from simply wanting conversation
or holding her in my arms.
Though never, never with thought
of fulfilling carnal desires;
in those days we both
kept our innocence.
Twenty years later however,
quite a different story;
thank you bride.
Author notes
Quote Prompt Contest
Quote Prompt:
***When my pulse flowed innocence***
A contest entry
- Delightful Prompt Contest. by delightfulmess.
700 points, ended November 25, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Stunning sentiment
And a sort of dedication.
Wonderfully penned. I really enjoyed this entry
Thank you so much for entering my contest.
Delila
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Another Awwwwwwww that's so beautiful what a lucky woman
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Aww, and here i thought you were talking about me. I thought it was a lovely piece. Your wife will love it I am sure. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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Beautiful Tribute
Oh my, you sent goosebumps thru me with this poem and took the prompt to the ulimate. Your love really shines thru for your wife. All the best in the contest, Michele
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