The pulse of life
Is more than sexual feelings.
Life is a teacher of lessons
and
Losing innocence through passions is lust
unless
Love is involved.
Like God's beauty around us,
Our emotions make any feeling an ecstasy
so
Let the pulses of life's ups and downs
Form your playground of experiences.
And
The day of losing your innocence
Will always be a treasured memory
If is given in love and not lust.
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Delightful Prompt Contest. by delightfulmess.
700 points, ended November 25, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very true. I agree But innocence does not always mean sex. It can be lost just from life itself.
Well done and thank you for entering my contest.
Delila -
at that age its always innocent love...nice sentiments
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could you spell out the word through? some contests don't enjoy chat speak. other than that, Great Job!
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Yes...But
Do you have to experience to know or can you know without experience? Thought provoking.
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