A trickle of your dreams
in all your loving screams
you take my breath away
I love the way you sway
is this what it seems
Spread your wings angel dove
don’t you know your my only love
I can take you so high
feel the love in your sigh
you fit me like a glove
You the angel of my mind
oh your love is always so kind
I am lost inside you
and all the things you do
girl your making me blind
There’s a silence in our bed
girl I’ve got a dizzy head
you shake me till tomorrow
it’s a time I want to borrow
in all the words, I have said
Author notes
#1:-Baby, your so smooth, you take every breath i breathe away...
Take it where you want, i want heartache, loneliness, emotion
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Comments
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i wish i could have given everyone gold!
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Oh my god is all i can say, this is such a beautiful poem full of love, meaning and truth its so well structured and flows really nicely well done



