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we Share

Just softly, for you were hesitant, your lips pressed up to mine
And your hand brushed my cheek, making me weak,
As I discovered why a ‘kiss’ is held divine
And I know now why lovers share
A ‘kiss’, to show they care.

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shannonlea

a kiss [in 5 lines or less]

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  • Frodofan silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    I like the way you rhymed this and sort of dwindled down to your finish with the length of the lines. Thanks for entering.