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thoughts- freestyle.


i want to keep writing
and writing

until i can sew holes
in my heart

and everything inside
tumbles out



but i want to stop writing

there's too much to do
too much to think, too many
promises i have to keep

and tomorrow's saturday.


i don't want to sleep-
i want to count the strands
in my pillow

think nothing, breathe nothing.

i want to be sad
but somehow i find myself glad-

and awkwardly, that rhymes.

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  • Walk-Free
    November 27, 2008

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    great that you wrote this, because i'm feeling the same way too.

    i haven't been writing much poetry nowadays and its great to know that you wrote this from the top of your head.

    candid, but ingenious