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Penalty




The bizarre fate of a fucking poet,
leaves no title or subject matter,
sedated, lost, womanizer, drugged,
only identifying his silhouette
cut into shadows to escape, unobtrusive.

Distress of a poem without
virgin to wait,
orphan to weather,
forgotten, overshadowed by a little.















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~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Orphan

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008
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    I'm gonna have to please ask that you label this Adult cause of the word use Thank You

    An excellent poem, this reached out of the screen and slapped me in the face demanding attention and I couldn't not give it

    Brillant write!

    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda