Promises, promises, promises and then contrition
Words of love and longing in-between sedition
All the lines now penned. The mighty Roustabout
Are cause for contemplation, and doubt
He loves her so he says. Caste those doubts aside
One day they shall marry. A virgin as his bride
But he must clean his slate. Mister never mean
And get that quick divorce, a dream
And she shall do the same. seeking his advice
Together they'll be happy. shedding all their vice
Words of magic flow between the words of lies
Penned by master poets, of disguise.
And promises...Cause hopes to rise.
By Bob Fox
A contest entry
- Exit Strategy by vampedvixen.
1200 points, ended November 27, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you so much for entering my contest. I haven't had a chance to reply to any of the poems until now. I love the way you play with words in this poem, you make them come to life and sing for the readers. I also think the rhyme and rhythm are fantastic. Great job on this piece!
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Very deep write her my friend
Yes indeed the young of today has found love just a phrase to get what they want uncaring of what they leave behind .Sad it is that the male and female of our race sems to have only one thing on their minds uncareing of the person they are with
Sad it is
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Interesting poem love the flow and the rythym.
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A very well written poem Bob
Keep 'em commin my friend, love to read you
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i think thisi s a predict that a lot of futures will face, this is a good read, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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I think this probably happens a lot! Great write Bob!
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Wow... very good poem Bob... very well put together my friend... but then again I love reading your poems lol... thanks for sharing, xx
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There are alot of players on here. One of the things I found the other day was a man who is also one of the better known female erotic poets on the site. I wonder how many times this scenario has been played out in the AP underbelly.
Mike
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Lol
Mike that is so funny. Just goes to show. Just yeterday I lost a reader cause he thinks I am lying to him about a pretty big female player on here. The guy has become obsessed with her. What am shame.
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bob i agree about the woman players here,,,i have had so many propositions i blush,,,true comment by you ,,,everything is on offer isnt it
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Promises how many times have we heard that word, only to be broken
brill poem
good luck in the contest
June
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Wow,
Its not a group then, it a mind game played to take control,and feel that void ,hearts kept beating with words of deceit, just to make that other person complete! wow that is great Bob,
Blessings
Rend
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wow! I like this one. very well written. It kept me interested as all your poems do.
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Oh the webs we weave...and we call ourselves adults...hum...Excellent write...
"Promises, promises, promises and then contrition
Words of love and longing in-between sedition"
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sin and forgiveness, both can be brought to the light by love. two sides of a coin, choices and emotions. I loved it bob, really...
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thank you very much for the gracious compliment i am going to bed now but i will read some of your work when i get a chance probably tomorrow (well today now lol) my wife georgie recommended you and holds your poetry in high regard, so again thank you very much,
(ungay) hugs lol,
shane
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Jane says ......
Penned by master poets,of disguise
Too true...
write and write and write some more!!!!
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Bravo and Amen
So True So True So True!!!!!!!!!
Yes the games are played, the hearts are broken, the tears fall, and you lose all faith and trust in love and some are never the same again, all because they play their games.
TERRIFIC poem you have penned. Always so much truth in your writing.
Hugs and Smiles to a friend
Bless You, Sandy
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Sandy
There are so many players on here. Travelling saleman selling sex. Ladies in waiting. Married lusters. Broken promises. Purveyors of false hopes. I know only to well. For I to have been a believer. But I learned qiuck. Lol & many on here shall wish to slap my face.
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