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Conscience

My conscience is a butterfly
fragile, yet persistent
like a memory you long to forget

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mmm. neat contest.

There it be...
I can't get further than that...

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 14, 2008
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    Ummmm, what contest

    Nice phrase


    • suzume
      November 14, 2008
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      hmmm maybe i just wrote it and forgot to enter... space cadet moment.
      i was wondering why that last comment was treating it like a full fledged poem. ^_^

      oh well...


  • RhiannonMari
    November 14, 2008

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    short & sweet

    definitely to the point there, and very descriptive. i think you've got that described perfectly... or at least as close to perfect as you can get. great job!