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A tear on a leaf~

A tear on a leaf,
One delicate drop,
Gliding smoothly down to the tip
To dangle unsurely.

A tear on a leaf,
One drop of torment
From the corners of the eyes of the sky
From the clouds as they die.

A drop on a leaf,
One of a million, or a billion,
Or a gazillion such drops of dew.

A tear on a leaf
Is nothing special,
But this one I cried for you.
~

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  • FreeTara
    November 18, 2008
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    I wish i could have given everyone gold!!!

  • FreeTara
    November 14, 2008

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    wow, there was something about this that just had me captivated, well done. The last stanza was brilliantly written full of emotion


  • Scyphon
    November 14, 2008
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    Well done poem, the last stanza was my favorite. Really was touching. Best of luck to you