You don't have to call me anymore
I don't need to hear your voice now
Its hard enough to let go
Why can't I stop talking with you
Just hang up, put down the phone
You're my weakness and I need you
Every word hurts and heals
All these thoughts
Baby I can't lose you again
I've done it before
This time shouldn't be like that
Why do I do this to myself
You're so Incredible
I take you for granted
Someone else will appreciate
All the wonderful things you do
Waiting for me, Holding me up
Standing tall, Never letting me fall
What would I be without you
Oh I know, become the same ole slut
Without you
I'm just a Kindegartener coloring
Sloppy and Outside all the lines
Tell my now, why did I do that to you
How could I hurt you like this
Now I realize how much better you deserve
Get over me
Thats what you should do
Leave me alone
You don't have to call me anymore
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I have so many emotions and thoughts swirling around this was all I could get out of the jumbled up mess that I am right now....<3
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Without you
I'm just a Kindegartener coloring
Sloppy and Outside all the lines
That was really a great set of lines. I really appreciated your comment on my work. It's hard to get ppl to comment. so thank you. Looking forward to read more of your work.
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There is an incredible amount of emotion here.... one that I have seen and experienced personally, and I understand the turmoil that you must have been going through... I look forward to seeing what other writes you have!
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WOw, Alot of emotion flowing through here.
And as for the jumbled up mess you speak of in your AN's notes.. Sometimes that jumbled up mess becomes great poetry wether you believe it or not.
The emotion was raw ,tender,honest, and was absolutely real here! I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing.
-Mandi
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It doesn't have to rhyme or make sense to anyone but you. A jumbled up mess? I don't think so. The emotion is raw and real. Thanks for sharing.
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A very expressive write. A swirling jumble of emotions and thoughts can sometimes lead to wonderful poetry. This one has an excellent flow. I enjoyed your true to life style. Thanks for sharing.
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this poem has a nice permanent flow to it and its not to long which is always good, the pain your putting yourself through in this is very apparent also and a situation many of us have been in, i like the onesty of words here abigail xx
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this is awesome. there are very few that inspire me to write a non rhyming poem but you have done just that. good job. excellent write!
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