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one of those moments

I remember
it happening
and I remember
it well
the feeling
of my heart
sinking from chest
into my stomach
dropping like
a penny into
a well
only not so small
and without
the courtesy
of making a sound

and so we sat
in silence
and my mind
reached out
for words
and concepts
and understanding
but found nothing

and I could
sense
the world
moving
beneath me
slowly
pulling the
rug out
from under
my feet

and I could
barely keep
my balance
and I could
scarcely keep
my breath

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