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frigid heartbeat

 

in love and loving it

 

 

Cold winter days bring me closer into your arms.

Frigid temperatures become faint once the warmth

of your touch finds me.

On my toes, I stand to reach, to find, that smile

that I love of yours.

 

Hold me close and be all that I need.

 

I love the winter and what this season brings.

Of all the ice and snow, the things most people

wait all year for - I don't.

 

I have you,

now I'm satisfied.

 

Author notes

This is based off of my real life feelings, although in this one, I wrote it from the girl's perspective.

Pic Credit: LOVE_by_anndeemar @ deviantART.com

Option - 3. Give me love. It can be about losing love of finding love i don't care it just has to be about you and that one other person...or people i don't know some people are weird that way.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 12

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    Ahhh love.
    That beautiful thing that fills you with joy and meaning
    and that cruel thing that can destroy you. I know it well!


  • Abstract Image
    November 19, 2008

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    beautiful writing you have here i just hope that someday that i find that one i'm looking for...good luck.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    November 16, 2008

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    -I have you,
    now I'm satisfied.
    ...

    What a brilliant way to end this. It was so real and divine. The emotions just pour from the page. I'm loving these love poems of yours It's refreshing to read about happily ever afters and happiness♥


  • Joseph Hollis
    November 14, 2008
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    Lovely and heartfelt. I enjoyed the read.