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poetic touch

water drop holds many thoughts
unable to script,

except when light dips
writes a poem with seven colors.

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A contest entry for:
Incompleted Thoughts (quick and easy contest)

how do you accout for thoughts that are not penned.

A contest entry

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  • crimsondew
    November 14, 2008
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    Yes the light has to fall...a line with several interpretations I might say..
    Fine write here!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    space between the thoughts
    from one light
    seven spirits, a lovely rainbow full of truth and inspiration, and words flow
    as do these soulful words
    WONDERFUL PLEASURE
    God bless you my friend...


  • McRae by nature
    November 13, 2008

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    This is really great. This contest is going to be so hard to judge. This piece was very intriguing, especially that last line, writing in colors; it is just a beautiful image, but not feathery one, it has strength.

    Amazing, thank you

    Carrie