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Total Randomness


Today the sun is shining bright,
Shining down on me with all it's light.
Oh, what a beautiful sight,
I look up and stare at it with all my might.

I look at the birdies fly,
they are flying high.
Making me high,
but hey, I too can fly!

Oh, I want to be flower,
so I can have girl power.
Oh fairy, change me for an hour,
so my life won't be so dour!

Oh, why do I feel so bare,
it feels like I have no hair.
But it's not like I even care,
I shaved it off in a dare!

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  • Ken-Maverick
    November 21, 2008

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    HAHAHA
    Serious?
    you shaved your hair off in a dare?

    All the best to you in the contest and thanks for entering

    Ken


  • samantha jean
    November 13, 2008
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    Made me smile. =D
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    November 13, 2008
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    nothing better than girl power

    • BloodRosary
      November 14, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment and applauds, I absolutely agree with you on girl power!

  • BloodRosary
    November 13, 2008
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    Random and weird. Hope it cheers you up...

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