Today the sun is shining bright,
Shining down on me with all it's light.
Oh, what a beautiful sight,
I look up and stare at it with all my might.
I look at the birdies fly,
they are flying high.
Making me high,
but hey, I too can fly!
Oh, I want to be flower,
so I can have girl power.
Oh fairy, change me for an hour,
so my life won't be so dour!
Oh, why do I feel so bare,
it feels like I have no hair.
But it's not like I even care,
I shaved it off in a dare!
A contest entry
- Swift Something Happy by Ken-Maverick.
2400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
...comments and constructive criticism are welcomed...
Comments
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HAHAHA

Serious?
you shaved your hair off in a dare?
All the best to you in the contest and thanks for entering
Ken -
Made me smile. =D
Good luck in the contest. -
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Thank you. Glad to make someone smile!!
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nothing better than girl power


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Thanks for the comment and applauds, I absolutely agree with you on girl power!
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Random and weird. Hope it cheers you up...
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