Extreme measures to blackout
Dreams of poetic treasures in a grassy house
Words come tumbling, 5 times about...
Stumbling over lines that appears slightly drunk like dragon stout
Water that sooths the stomach and mouth, sometimes gripes me about
High cost of octane and how the flights freezes them in route
This portal has open passages to realms untouched
Dark places in wounded minds whispering in French, let's go Dutch!
Guarded safe for safe keepings, but not saving much
Embedded fortitude from souls screaming out like breaks over the clutch
I touch, phone services with technologies beyond dimensions' that appear rough
This style is privy to sound barriers unknown,
As I download the blackberry’s warranty and cell zone
I'm cloning myself, two tone, double vision, but envisioned another ROME
Their melon's are swollen, their nose's begin to foam
Red zone, red zone, the feds are in to hon., it's bedlam here, send them all back home!
Nightmares begin to fester
Flights from here with heathens from that 4 year-yester,
Doused with heated hatred because of the poison that shifted from his mouth's wind Chester......
..........(Coughing, with loss of wind,
tossing cookies because they're at a lost of him,
these earthlings are scorching from the dark beyond, it's costing them)........
Caught him cold in his chest,(ahhhh)
He caught a cold on his chest,
No protection from that lizard skin vest
False eyes looked in distress
Hawked eyes peered through the crowed nest
A hulking surprise when he stomped threw the crest
Vomit flu across the cross of the forgotten sets
His flames dried the pool, sorry, they won't pull through,
The portal left their souls to rest!
Engulfed with bird flu
I toxic spew over pawns in the game of chess
Boxed it with Elmer’s' glue and powdered shrews, then shipped the best
Drilled the fire marshal from earth's orbit,
enlightened the sun to force the equator’s forfeit
The portals opened with arms of a sorceress
Tress in the spring of the palms are offering whips
Vocal whelps are slashed aboard the bleeding lips
Dangerously lead by a nation of alien forces, enraged with an ESL lisp
Author notes
I've been watching you little lost souls make the attempts to shun my name, to alter my forces of evil sublime THOUGHT, however your attempts are dim like the nit-witts you ALL are! I've never left, I just allowed you peasants to breathe for a short moment! Grieve your slow deaths....the THINKER rises with an almighty hand to smash ALL who visits my open portal to the gates of myTHOUGHT process...welcome back to HELL!....The THINKER!!!!!!!!!!!!
The latess addition to The THINKER's Word Warz...[T h e P o r t a l ]
It's on once again boys and girls! The war has revisit the land of make-believe to elivate your enjoyment and overall entertainment! I'm truly sorry for leaving you waiting, but we're here with the hopes that you'll continue to seek our crazy ideas and mounds of energy out! Please enjoy with lots of laughter. Thanks for coming! (WWDZ 11/13/08)
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How did I miss this chapter??? I found this on your page, and thought, oh wow! another Sci-fi nut, yay! and then I found out that this is part of the War with Wordz ---sssst! Hot! Love this, and can see why sometime the other fellows have to run to catch up! Well-done!
Lita
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One thing that brings out the power in any write is not only its force, but somewhere there is always humility. I read this through a few times and was impressed with the flow and delivery of the genre of thinking. But where was the subtle line of humility. Without that it falls flat and loses appeal. It is an amazing truth that humility crumbles empires and dashes towers to pieces. I do not see where that has changed. I enjoyed your write and am out of happy clappy men or you would get yours. It just seems that there is a lot of arrogance here and the smell of that is more than a little distasteful to any reader. RC
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this is a good write from you but i think that with proper punctuation it would be much better. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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you got skills. but i see in the future a rise of a new being. this piece is hot. real talk. i look forward to reading more of your pieces
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HAHAHAHA!
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(pssst! WWDZ, this is funny as I don't know what. Maybe you should consider stand-up comedy too as a vocation. "...with an ESL lisp..."? That's hilarious! Yo, I loved this comeback. Unfortunately for the THINKER, it may be his last...lol.AsIThink...)
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"This was a cute attempt to fluster me....not hardly did you even come close to attaching any bitterness towards your lovely gestures! I thank you for being such a pathetic whimp, but i need you to be more of a fighter instead of one who continues to hide from the REAPER!" The THINKER
This was termendously funny! Had me in stitches...well almost! lol! Love the beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeps! Someone better get a new machine! lol WWDZ 11/29/08
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Although the content is very well written, the meter and over all flow of this piece threw me off...perhaps this is the way you intended? Please enlighten me
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yes for it is not my intent to throw anyone off of anything or any place for that matter, but to enlighten one's soul with infinit wisdom from a sublime relm of futuristic thought in the world of comic book style characters...lol! I was just having pain ole' fun, that's it! Hope you enjoyed it and that you'll challenge yourself to come back for more....if you dare! lol, thanks again!
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Most Excellent!!
This is some wicked great writing! Yes enjoyed verry much!
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Thanks kind sir for your wonderful comments! Hopefully, you'll be back soon!
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oohhh!!l.o.l.
l.o.l. yup yup!! yea booooyyyeee! pump it up homeboy u know it's hot!! wow..i can't think.. well be back soon..
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I'm glad you approve! lol...Always nice to have the stamp on the read! Need to find a way to keep the readers interested! Make other strides soon! Thanks again for the comments!
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