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Take Me Away

Gentle melody
Take me away...

No more chaos,
No more dismay.

Joyful melody
Becomes my oasis,

Blissful melody
Let me escape this.

Author notes

I don't know... I hear people playing music...I feel the music, and I have to join in. It's truly my sanctuary.

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  • Ginger Woods
    November 13, 2008
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    Some people think music's there life, and it can be


  • doglover
    November 13, 2008

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    music brightens every situation up

    music is just plain amazing. The wide variety we are offered in our time allows us to find something that explains every thought or feeling we have in life...


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    November 13, 2008
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    This is so lovely!! You did a very very beautiful job with this piece!!!