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I dont know

Ignorance an obsession?
Actualities more like false impressions.
Pointless conversations
Polluting effective communication
Facts merely misinterpretations
Knowledge synonymous to irrational decisions

A contest entry

where am i going with this is anywhere?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Rhythm Child
    November 14, 2008

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    this was amazing, your use of rhyme, the thoughtfullness it envoked, this was truly an original write and something that was a pleasure to read


  • poetrandy
    November 14, 2008

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    Thoughts & Questions!

    WOW! What a fine, short poem! The ideas and thoughts presented here are creative and original in a poetry form like this! Great presentation! Good imagery in brief form! Very good work!


  • McRae by nature
    November 13, 2008

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    I really, really loved these lines. They actually stand out pretty well on their own. What is nice, is that the idea you present actually makes sense. Very well done.

    Carrie


  • satur9
    November 13, 2008
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    i agree

    i like this as it is, short and sweet.