"In the beginning", states the book of truth, be that as it may
shades of dark and light were there long before the inception
of that testament, eons before there lived creatures of such
vastness, there too plants unusual, sustained these gigantic
feeders long into winters nights
So where though is it then written this passage of monster
delights, and what of water pools, thunder and rain, trees
and grain, all that wonder before the book of genesis
For there in the garden of Eden, one Adam and Eve were
said to have been created, there in this paradise they came
together and sucked and fucked, sucked and fucked, thus the
race to populate so came to be. Not long into all this sucking
and fucking, this human, a man called Posalosa thought
there should be law, and so it came to be
Forget that there ever was anything before Adam and Eve on
this earth, here we only talk of truth, for giant monsters so
never were, only in minds of misguided youth they live. So
all above is a lie if you must know, excluding Adam and Eve
and the book of genesis of cause
As before mentioned, all humans would be subject to law
Posalosa thought long on into the night, and thus the book
of truth came to be, made from stone for all to see
"In the beginning some fuck created heaven and hell", he
wrote. "Now the earth proved to be a dark place and useless"
he proceeded, there too this unknown he said, spawned
these very words. "let light come to be", so a monkey jumped
out off a tree. After that this unsung hero saw that the
light was no good, so this dumb fuck tried over. "Let night
come to be", and so he made a balloon
Posalosa saw that the faults made could be bettered, he so
then set about writing the book of truth, and so it came that
the book was written. Law posalosa told his varlet followers
would free man from cruelest slavery, give back their right
to party, and so it came to be, a book that all men and the
fair ones could read and understand
"Go forth and take from others what you wish, but only in
sickness and death". "Give away your body for pleasure to
anyone who desires", such it then was, and more as follows
"Where there be blood gold, let there be bold men to behold
Where there be women evil, let there be rape and torment
From every freedom born not, let there come somebody dumb
for the world there should not be fair to everyone", and so
all written here came to be
Humankind so there followed the guidelines set down by the
book of truth. Posalosa and his book of law, people followed
tooth and nail throughout history
"Be kind to no one, from love make war, for the world is
nothing but a whore", there it is written this very truth
Demons surrendered in bloom of youth, nothing gained
through hard work, lost souls there so went berserk
suffered as was written, and the people knew no better
for Posalosa was king, his word, the law
Oh Posalosa we pray to thee, free us from wealth and give
us all nothing, let women swallow cock and balls, let men
rape young girls so small, and so they did as was written in
the book of truth. Violence too should be dished out to one
who doesn't deserve it, for there such satisfaction be made
And so it was done, the book of truth had won, amen!
Author notes
This poem is inspired by teachings of old, twisted truth it is, and a satire foremost
and should NOT be taken seriously. Having said that, much of what is written in
the book of truth is a lie, made up by man to control the human race since the
beginning of human history. There are those who believe dinosaurs never were
and are only creatures that live in vivid imaginations, for to accept that dinosaurs
once walked the earth, is to accept life on the planet long before Adam and Eve.
Note: "Posalosa" is a play on two words, poser and loser. "Gast Veihgan Du Maunkur"
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A contest entry
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Haha, man this was deep. The book of truth is indeed filled with all kinds of excrement from the asses of pricks desiring to take advantage of blind sheep. I rather enjoyed how you laid this poem out, flow was good, could be taken offensively, had meaning behind it, and even through in a couple of profanities here and there. This poem will surely do will for the contest ^^.
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Indeed
this is very twisted and the words you used to decribe this kinda nightmarish scene is very well done so here is my verdict this poem has a really good title and through some lines it dropped and left me hanging but it picked me up soon afer that very captivating well done. -
this is so amazing write, it made me laught out my tears, lol, it is surely a twisted truth beyond dought, the book ot truth, " should have been the book of false" lol, no, its quite right as it is , i really enjoy it, good luck in the contest, very creativ epoem, this part was my fav,
"Go forth and take from others what you wish, but only in
sickness and death". "Give away your body for pleasure to
anyone who desires", such it then was, and more as follows
"Where there be blood gold, let there be bold men to behold
Where there be women evil, let there be rape and torment
From every freedom born not, let there come somebody dumb
for the world there should not be fair to everyone", and so
all written here came to be
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i loved this very llllllloooooonnnnnggggg!!!! poem
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This has me wondering....it is strange how some don't believe in dinosaurs, yet the fossil remains are clearly visible to see. great point!
Becca
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Niiiice
I laughed out loud several times. If you haven't already, you should write short stories - I'd clear my schedule to read any. Posslosa, the whimsical Zeus, is more honest than any "real" one. "In the beginning some fuck created heaven and hell". I'm getting half a dozen interpretations/images from this line alone. Keep showing your talent ;-)
Dw
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Hilarious
This is poignant and thoroughly amusing. A masterpiece of our days. haha. I love it. You said it all, and I don't feel that much more could be said so I will just shut up and applaud.
Cheers and congrats on a good write.
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Wow!
This is dark, but excellent. I agree with lovesky, how sometimes the voice of one can impact a whole world of people and that person is just a lier and no good for man to be listening to. it causes such disaster among one's own kind. Great Job Keep up the Great Work!
-scarletfox-
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I like this , very interesting how sometimes the voice of one can have such an impact on a large amount of man kind , worse still the voice might not be the one that should be listened to just because it is spoken.
Great write
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This is interesting...sounds sort of like it is full of hate? May I ask what is the target of this hatred?
ASM
AKA Raymond -
These fork tongue words lack any truth
The way they sound is so uncouth
You say you've found a better way
Your path is death, your led astray
You look for lies and so you speak
You speak the thing you always seek
You seek the thing you love the most
The most you'll find is in this post -
I love epics and i love this, very well done and it's more and more difficult to judge this contest when everything that is being entered is so well done.
Amazing write, thank you for providing it to the contest and good luck
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