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Rise Above You

I was cussed today,
by a friend gone astray.
Cussed for my beliefs and how I see the world,
I set, watch and listen to how things unfurl.
This world is cruel,
cruel to this with differences.

This is to those who shun me,
I spit in your face with intelligince at my back.
If you wish to hack at my soul,
your efforts are in vain
and your actions strain.
I will rise above you and be better than you will ever dream.
Wrong to you is what I may seem.
I wish you well my now long lost friend,
I hope to never see your ignorant face again.

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  • Flowergirl
    April 8
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    very nice write i too feel this world can be cruel very nice keep it up...


  • TheDayTimeStopped
    December 29, 2008

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    wow this is good and i can completely relate. those friends who talk trash about you behind your back and then are all buddy buddy to your face. I love this. good write


  • Addicus
    November 14, 2008
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    Verry nice