I remember when I used to laugh
I remember when I used to live
Now it just seems like a pleasant memory
Now you just get to watch me melt
like a wax candle dripping to the floor
Soon I'll go up in smoke and dissipate
Just another wisp of fog
Pick me up and make me back into what I was
Mold me into your perfect somebody
These are my last days I"ll see it to the end
I'll become what you want even if its just to see your smile
This is my life, one service and silence
I'll light your way as you continue carry me
A contest entry
- make me cry, make me feel alive. by savemysoul.
1400 points, ended November 20, 129 entries
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Comments
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powerfully written with emotion. you did well with this. thanks for entering and good luck.
-- jordan. -
awww wow... veyr powerful and sad...im sorry you are located in such a state and i do truly hopeyou get better and that everything goes the way it should be...
though i have one advice to give you;
never be someone you're not jsut so someone important to you can feel like you are the right person for she/he, being someone else isnt always good, be yourself and if the person doesn't valorize who you are then its not worth it
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I like it...Very nice flow...yet so sad..
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