I did my best, that's all I could do
I stand here now at the final crossroads of my life
often times feeling lost and alone
dear lord, it's been so hard trying to find you
please take my hand and don't let me fall
I can't do this myself
I need you in my life afterall
can't believe you gave your only son to save the likes of me
I will praise you for all eternity
your son paid the final cost
by his blood I am no longer lost
each time I stumbled, each time I fell
you carried me through
please take my hand and I will follow you
Author notes
my favorite food is a pizza with "everything but the kitchen sink" from Geno's in Chicago
credit to photobucket for picture
A contest entry
- Where Will Your Road Lead by Starz of Heaven.
750 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love the inner-depth to this - lovely job on the wording and emotions.
best wishes in the contest.
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great job :)
this is an amazing piece!!
i absolutely adore it, there's fantastic imagery here as well!
it sounds so urgent--desperate, it gives an amazing effect
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I think that you did a great job here I like this piece the only thing that I ask is that you credit photo bucket in your authors notes for the picture good luck
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