This is an original song i've done. I'll add the lyrics but i have two places where you can hear it (EVERYTHING IS DONE BY ME: i did the keyboard and the vocals.....there are no effects on my voice....the song is just echoe-ing).
i have a music myspace put up with my vocal covers and this original one i did. UNFORTUNATELY, my computer crashed and i lost everything, so on my myspace is only the first verse and the chorus.
go to (THE LYRICS ARE DOWN BELOW, READ THEM FIRST, THEN GO TO LINK....YOU'LL NEED THE LYRICS WHEN LISTENING TO THE SONG):
www.myspace.com/atmosphericlullabye
I ALSO HAVE IT UP ON MY YOUTUBE. THIS IS THE ROUGH VERSION, and the keyboard drowns out my voice.....but this one has the two versus and chorus....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nb3xe_S_XZs
((this song is very personal to me, read the lyrics and you'll see why. IT'S ABOUT MY MOM'S B/F and how the abuse he put me through effected me))
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LYRICS:
she lays in bed and dissappears
inside her head, away from him.
Sorrow from the memories,
she prays for death, a sweet relief
angels dance upon her grave
clouds darken her battered soul
tears fell like crystal rain
they failed to see the pain she felt
Her innocense was taken from her,
pain carves trails into her skin.
"Please, dear god, don't let him come,
someone save me from this dream."
She writes a note in crimson tears
and prepares to say her last goodbye.
She drops down on her knees and prays,
to fade away without a trace.
Please tell me what you think
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i listened to the song on youtube, your voice is amazing but to be honest i thought it was going to be something hard, but still it was great
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yeah, and trust me.....IT WOULD'VE been hard if i had the write equipment. All i have is this lousy sound recorder now, and you can't do shit with it. You have to keep hitting record, otherwise time will run out. The quality is horrible. :S
so, i couldn't do have of the shit i wanted it. I wanted to add guitar and all that shit in (since you obviously know i have a guitar, distortioner, and all that shit.....)
but yeah, i didn't have the time wiht college and all that stuff going on. Thanks for your compliment!!!!
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I listened to this on youtube, fantastic song hun, has such a haunting air to it, sorrow deeply etched throughout. The lyrics are superbly penned, but then I would expect no less from you
I don't know if the echo is intentional or not but I like it, really adds to the mystical air this carries. Outstanding work hun 
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