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May/December Lovers



I had been technically just a kid

yet, more woman than he could handle

with all the things we once did

he was much older than me

that didn't stop my mind

from having that repeating fantasy

his hands caressing, sending shivers up my spine

while his mouth nibbled, teased

hungry lips ravishing mine

being carried gently to his bed

the glowing fireplace was no competition

for the fireworks going off in my head

our clothes ripped, tossed on the floor

his body glistening with sweat, a feast for my eyes

arms and legs entertwined

only made me want him all the more

he takes me slowly, fully, completely

lost in the waves of passion my soul surrenders

my heart is captured and I'm right where I want to be

sadly, this is all just a dream...

we never went past third base

if only I could go back to that time again

just the two of us

I can feel his heart beating

in rhythm with my own

and the scent of his cologne

while my cheek rested against his chest

I remember it all so clearly

except for

his face


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  • splinteroflight.
    November 13, 2008
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    incredible

    I love this, it's so.. raw.
    The emotion, it's all said so fast, this is amazing - good luck
    <3<3<3