I had been technically just a kid
yet, more woman than he could handle
with all the things we once did
he was much older than me
that didn't stop my mind
from having that repeating fantasy
his hands caressing, sending shivers up my spine
while his mouth nibbled, teased
hungry lips ravishing mine
being carried gently to his bed
the glowing fireplace was no competition
for the fireworks going off in my head
our clothes ripped, tossed on the floor
his body glistening with sweat, a feast for my eyes
arms and legs entertwined
only made me want him all the more
he takes me slowly, fully, completely
lost in the waves of passion my soul surrenders
my heart is captured and I'm right where I want to be
sadly, this is all just a dream...
we never went past third base
if only I could go back to that time again
just the two of us
I can feel his heart beating
in rhythm with my own
and the scent of his cologne
while my cheek rested against his chest
I remember it all so clearly
except for
his face
A contest entry
- I shouldn't love you; But I want to. by splinteroflight..
550 points, ended November 14, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Forbidden Love by PrincessKazza.
400 points, ended December 18, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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incredible
I love this, it's so.. raw.
The emotion, it's all said so fast, this is amazing - good luck
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