he placed me down on the piano
hands stronger, and with mite.
it was not forced, yet it was sudden
as he swayed me, laid me
and placed his fingers in the right direction.
one chord in the progression
just waiting for the hook of the melody.
because if he was the backdrop
I was his wordplay
and together we made love songs
that go beyond the radio
and into the back beat of our hearts.
and the back seat of his car.
Author notes
it is what it is.
sn: Bloved
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Comments
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This is a high gloss picture made with words. I love the symbolism!
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Very vivid and descriptive words grace this page. You painted an honest picture then, placed in your author notes, the raw facts. Loved this!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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wow
this was way rad. loved the emotion. i could really see you guys at the piano together, and leaving for elsewhere haha. But very good, my favorite lines are:
because if he was the backdrop
I was his wordplay
and together we made love songs
"Beautiful write"
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