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you smile for me

For Me

The day I saw you, a normal day
The day I hugged you, a good day
The day we made friends, a bright day
The day we were there for each other, a caring day

As time drifted away, my thoughts still stayed alive
Even though my heart was aching, you still lived in me
As the queen in my bee hive
Like a angel, just made for me

The day we fell out, a suicidal day
The days I missed you, gloomy days
The days remembering you, sorrowful days
The day I understood I love you, guiltiest day

Yes, days of the beginning was filled with joy
There was freedom in us, you was my friend
Today, I have u again, my heart filled with joy
You’re the one how blooms in me, my friend

The day you forgave me, the best day ever
The day you made me feel like me, the gift of life  
The day you made me smile, the precious day ever
The day we realised we, the best friend forever

For you

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The words to my best friend
to you my life ... Neena,Nimisha,Kavitha,Hiba

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  • hamid
    November 21, 2008

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    The day we realised we, the best friend forever
    The bset line of the poem or i can say the line which touch my heart. Good work poet.
    Ali