it's common knowledge
among us common folk
baby
that there's an exceptions to every rule
like i'm not a joke but i may be a fool
guess i 'm only a geek
but hey now
aren't geeks the new cool?
i'm not a joke but
i may be a fool
eany meany miney mo honey
i may not but be fun but
i sure can be funny
went to m'c d's
cuz double cheeseburgers rule
I'm not a joke but i may be a fool
eany meany miney mo honey
i may not but be fun but
i sure can be funny
A contest entry
- Prompt Semi-Quickie by JeannieD Hunter.
500 points, ended November 16, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nope, not even a fool,could write like this.
Joe
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Always unique! I like that about your poetry.
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Swan song
Thanks so much for reading me!
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This is a very good take on the prompt. I did get kinda lost in the next to last stanza, not sure what you meant. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Cool! Much better.
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JeannieD Hunter
your right, it was clumsy so i did some editing. thanks!
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