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Rooted Deep Within

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Love is beautiful when rooted deep within;

heart with soul is where this begins.

Nakedness of your real, true being,
means purging weeds that strangle loves seeing.

Surrendering cries of lies within your soul,
brought to God brings cleansing, the perfect goal;

without darkness being purged into the light,
love's not deeply rooted, then we live in plight.

We go deeper as we grow and learn;

love is the intensity for which we all yearn.
We only know love,
because He first loved us with cleansing from above.

True love is beautiful when one shares there own selves ever so true?

that meeting can be deeply rooted in you;

there's nothing that can compare,
when roots entwined together share.

Life is for the living;
God's love should be our pleasure, which is of His giving.
Confession of my heart, with soul cleansing belief;
love rooted deep within, bringing much relief.

 

 

 

 

Written by: © Kelle Marie Stavron, All rights reserved

November 13, 2008

 

 

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Quote for this contest: The roots of love are deeper than every thing....Unknown

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Isn't true love just beautiful when one shares there ownselves ever so true???

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  • abu nuwas
    November 19
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    How sad. I do not share your certainties, but cannot imagine what it is like to be in your position, after much struggle.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 29
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    Good for book

    Lovely write honey truly lovely


  • penman gold member
    September 27
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    Excellent

    What a deeply moving write. And so very well done. Congratulations on the silver.


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    September 8

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    Bountiful and profound...



    Unique depicting of the most sublime feeling of the animal word, inclusive the one that doesn't belong to the FAUNA: Mankind.

    "Rooted Deep Within" recites its mellifluous lines airing and blown by winds of wisdom.

    Much gratitude to the author of this perfumed flower, "Rooted Deep Within".

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

    ><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> P.S.: LINE thirteen: Please consider revising it. LINE eighteen: It has a sensitive expression that leads one to THE FIRST COMMANDMENT. Please consider a revision to make it universal.


  • mgmc gold member
    August 13

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    Excellent

    Very well written. I really love certain phrases, "...purging weeds that strangle love's seeing," and "..Surrendering lies of cries within your soul." I love the concept of love growing like the roots of a tree (I have a poem I've been working on with that premise).
    As someone else noted, your poem comes straight from the heart!


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    July 13

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    Hoodwinked 129

    Love is indeed beautiful when shared by two people who love unconditionally and it is indeed true love. True love is hard to find though. Congats on the silver trophy. You have been hoodwinked because someone cares.

  • judmc
    July 10

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    Spotlighted ! ! !

    A wonderfully written poem straight from the heart leaves a nice feeling of sincerity in every line....Love is all you need
    ..........George.......


  • awannabepoet
    May 14
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    This really touched a chord with me for I so believe in eternal love and the bond that exists between two souls that will never be apart.

    Thanks so much for penning and sharing this my friend, I need to come visit your page more often I always find some inspiration in what you write.

    I like it, I like it so!


  • guruist
    March 16
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    one who sees

    i dread these thoughts as i dread these feelings that plague which brought them along. I know He loves me in a way no other can and yet my perfect aura is again marred by my imperfect behavior, I am plagued. I love my Lord and so I accept these which burden me for i kno i can overcome for i am He and He is me. Thanx for the thoughts and the poem it was beautiful. Terrell


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 2
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    This is exquisite. Your words fill my day with such delight and brightness. Beautiful write.


  • Rovingone gold member
    March 1

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    Such a wonderful collection of thoughts, and a rainbow of colors to express it in. It's a true delight to the senses and to the heart. God has blessed you with such a talent.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 17
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    Words of Wisdom.....

    I enjoy the strong message within your weavings here. This is a very indepth piece, and many can read and click away having been taught something by it. I appreciate your heart sharing here, and may you continue to weave your words of wonder. Peace, Love, and Light!

    -Timothy


  • PurpleSky
    January 11
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  • rinzurajan
    January 2
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    wow...u showcased true emotions with this one...

    no doubts the silver was yours...





  • Lukey
    December 21, 2008

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    You have a natural gift of bringing to light the love of God. It's nice that you can share this compassion, and thanks for sharing this message with so many others. I look forward to reading more of your works.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    Congratulations on the Silver Cup!!!

    This is a very beautifully written poem, I love the imagery and the heart-and-soul-felt message within these pure lines... Thank you for sharing. Take care & keep it flowing... Peace, love & hugs always, xx Cyn xx


  • Arizona Sunset
    November 22, 2008

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    This is very beautiful The roots of love must be deep to stand strong and firm together. I love where you took this promt. Congrats to you on the silver blessings always~ Trisha~


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    Hum..well penned and very thoughtful turns after the lines..and words..I love it..and thank you so much for the wonderful entry in my contest...


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    A truly profound write...differentiated in the spiritual sense that distinctly puts true loving as God loves is with His help..


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 17, 2008

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    this is a beautiful poem i mean this is beau-t-iful, i enjoyed reading it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Talking Toni gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    Very Nice Kelle...

    I see your friend omitted some unnecessary words to shorten the lines and better the meter...still I can tell it is your heart that wrote these words...I think alot of us write very well we just need help with editing things like punctuation and extra words that don't really need to be there not really adding anything important to the poem...Still very nice and it does have a better flow , but those incredible rhymes are all YOU!!!!


  • redhanded
    November 16, 2008

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    aw very good write. i enjoyed this very much.
    keep up the good work and best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
    andi
    (redhanded)


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 16, 2008
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    Bravo!

    Now I see a synthesis that matches the beauty of the prompt in a way that magnifies The Creator to the max! You have a heart of gold & it shows through the thoughts you convey! All the best in the Contest.


  • a.changed-soul.
    November 16, 2008

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    This was absolutely beautiful!

    "Life is for the living;
    God's love should be our pleasure, which is of His giving.
    Confession of my heart, with soul cleansing belief;
    love rooted deep within, bringing much relief."

    This was excellent. You've outdone yourself on this one Kelle.

    Beautiful Imagery indeed.

    You'll do great in the contest! ^^

    &

    Nikki.






  • Patpowers silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    Love this work of poetry Kellie. Nice words and imagery! Thanks for sharing your talents!

  • michaeline
    November 16, 2008

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    Good luck to you in the contest.This poem is beautiful,and the picture is perfect.This poem runs deep for alot of people including me.I like your views on this piece.You did a great job.

  • thoughtsforu
    November 16, 2008

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    Excellent

    You have great imagery in this wonderful write. With God's love you will only experience the best in your life. Good luck in the contest.


  • Lily of The Valleys
    November 15, 2008
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    I loved this poem, it's beautiful, colorful, and heartfelt. I applaud you.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 15, 2008

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    Beautiful Sentiments!

    This is a fine take on the prompt! All the best in the contest. Love is truly rooted deeply within!


  • ebaby
    November 15, 2008

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    Wonderful poem, wonderfully written! Awsome pictue... I enjoyed reading this....... and yes its very true when one shares themselves.

  • cindyloo
    November 15, 2008

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    This is such an awesome take on the picture. I love it. It has a pure, spritual feel to it. All pure, intimate ,true love comes form God. Loved it all but my all time favorite line, "God's love is our pleasure which is His giving." Amazing poem!


  • OctoberCrush
    November 15, 2008
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    Oh Wow....
    That is absolutely beautiful! <3
    Wonderful job. I enjoyed every moment of it <3


  • rsugg
    November 15, 2008
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    WOW!!!

    You have a beautiful soul!!! You are so good!!!

    You have so much knowledge, wisdom and love to give. It is truly an honor to know you.

    You have been blessed with such an amazing gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.

    Once again, another awesome write!!!

    Sending you love and blessings...

    Robert


    • stavykm gold member
      November 15, 2008
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      Oh thank you for such a kind comment Robert. You are such a neat person and I'm so glad we met the way we did. You helped me more then you know for our speaking for the first time. Oh how I desire for God to truly use us in a way through Him and our son's memory which is imbeded in our hearts... Oh just to touch one life makes it all worth it somehow. Not that my son is dead but in that God uses all things to further his Kingdom and to help all man kind in which He loves and desires for them to accept His son for His ultimate sacrifice of grace for the atonement for our SINS in which we all have. Hopefully the message will be that IN HIM we can change our ways even just one minute at a time to not make the wrong choice in which can take your life, such as my precious sons.

      He Matt wrote me a poem like you wrote to your mom. Oh I loved your poem to your mom just like the poem my son wrote to me I absolutely treasure. It's on my poems I'm Focused on, on my profile page. It's called Thanks Mom. It was the third poem he wrote out of the four he wrote all together.

      You are also an increadible poet and have so much to offer on here and just in life.

      Sending you much love and blessings,
      Give my love to everyone at the Training Center too,
      Kelle Marie

  • Talking Toni gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Just LOvely!!!!

    Kelle this is just a brilliant take from the picture...You weave love and nature together so perfectly in this piece...Your imagery far exceeded the picture by far meaning this would have brought such imagery even without the picture.ANother amazing piece you have penned keep it flowing sister!!!!! Love you !!!~~~Toni~~~

    • stavykm gold member
      November 14, 2008
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      Oh dear sweet Toni thank you so much for the beautiful generous comment. I'm glad you liked it. It was fun for me to write. I've never used different colors before. Oh and I do believe what I wrote....

      Much Love
      Many Blessings
      Your Sister
      Kelle Marie


  • Roaddog Wolf
    November 14, 2008
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    Totally awesome write

    Think you hit the ball out of the park with this one Kelle, really a very beautifully penned poem!!


    • stavykm gold member
      November 14, 2008
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      Thanks Big Brother for the great comment.

      Love Ya
      Your Sis
      Kelle Marie

  • penman gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Excellent

    Oh my this is so well done. A great use of the roots of love, so very well worded. Best of luck in the contest.


    • stavykm gold member
      November 14, 2008
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      Oh penman thank you for the wonderful comment. Means the world to me.

      Many Blessings
      Much Love
      Kelle Marie


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    well done sister!
    OH..that was heavenly to read!
    the imagery with your poetic words was a feast to enjoy!
    loved it!
    well done sis, well done!
    ears/Seattle

    • stavykm gold member
      November 14, 2008
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      Thank you sweet sis for the beautiful comment on my poem Rooted Deep Within.. Oh the beauty of real love..

      Gotta Love Ya
      Your Sis
      Kelle Marie


  • georgie
    November 14, 2008

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    oops soz i clicked on this one again accidentally hon... hope u dont lose ur points for it coz i dont gain any for responding twice anyway... anyway im glad i did coz its such a gr8 piece and picture i enjoyed it all over again,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx

    • stavykm gold member
      November 14, 2008
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      Oh georgie I just love you. Thank you for reading my poem twice. I'm glad you liked it. I had fun writing this one. I never used different colors with the font before!!

      Hugs,
      Kelle Marie


  • Susan John Francis
    November 14, 2008
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    Very lovely write, and the discription of love even profound. A well written piece here.

    • stavykm gold member
      November 14, 2008
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      Thank you so much Susan for the kind comment on Rooted Deep Within. Means a lot that you read my poem.

      Blessings To You,
      Kelle Marie


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    What a beautifully grasping poem. Love the imagery and the first stanza is worded perfectly ...i love the subtle rhyme to it, that really makes this poem flow flawlessly.
    perfect ~

    • stavykm gold member
      November 15, 2008
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      Thank you for the beautiful encouraging comment on my poem Rooted Deep Within. So kind of you to comment. I shall get back to reading some of your work as soon as I can for I always return the favor.

      Wishing You Many Blessings
      Kelle Marie


  • doglover
    November 13, 2008
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    great job

    love is amazing, there is nothing like it and never will be

  • goalsv
    November 13, 2008

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    A truly loving write, so much love and adoration flows from this one. I love the discription and the depth you took it too. Awesome job as always!

  • Deepredvelvet
    November 13, 2008

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    a wonderful adaptation of love with much feeling......a very powerful piece of poetry
    Good luck in the contest


  • Confusedboy
    November 13, 2008
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    Wonderful, for love is precious. many of us never appreciate it, for real love does not come often or even if ever. treasure the value of it, for today is all we have to love, not knowing what tomorrow will bring us. Such depth of your love you share in this write. Delightful.

  • georgie
    November 13, 2008
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    stunning hon... isnt that an incredible pic... and your poem definitely does it justice... i even love the quote in your notes... perfection in a page,
    huge hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Sis,
    this is beautiful and so very true...love rooted deep by God is a love that last through thick and thin...your words are wonderful and so well said...your heart is so full of love and truth...
    Blessings,
    sis

  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Excellent write here

    You have penned this so very well honey and with such truth for sure .I would rate this between 1--10 a 10 for sure.


  • Sandygram
    November 13, 2008

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    So Beautiful And So true

    Your words speak of the wonderful love shared by two. It is the most wonderful feeling in the world when loved truly by the one in your heart. And when blessed by God it will stay strong forever and weather any storm.Your write with such passion and emotion dear friend. Love your rhyming and and the message your beautiful words convey. A pleasure to read. I hope all is well this Fall evening with you. I keep you in my prayers and in my heart. Hugs and Smiles to my sister in Christ.

    God Bless you and your family.

    Love You , Sandy

    • stavykm gold member
      November 13, 2008
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      Thank you Sandy for the beautiful comment on my spiritual love poem. Your encouraging love has always blessed my heart and I wanted to say thank you for just being who you are in which God intended for you to be. You are beautiful!!

      Much Love And Blessings
      To You And Your Family,

      Kelle Marie


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    November 13, 2008
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    This is so very beautiful!! Wow you did such a very magnificent job with this piece I love it!!

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