Blades
T E A R
Flesh
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Laughter
C R E A T E S
Music
Author notes
If you could just give me your opinion of which you like better, I'll erase the other one 
Sorry, I tried to message you but you hadn't answered. I just got a little impatient, sorry :]
Hope you like whichever one you choose ! Lol
A contest entry
- The brevette Contest 2 by Billbard.
1000 points, ended November 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think. Be critical
Comments
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Thank your very much for your entry into the Brevette contest.It was great to see that it took a few hours to close for judging.
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