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Hurt

My head was pounding,
from every time you hit it with your fist.

Every time,
you hit me,
it would feel like you hit me with a heavy object.

Every time you,
kicked me,
when I was allready down on the ground.

My bruses,
tell the whole story,
from the first time you every layed your hands on me.

When something was not going right,
you would take it out on me.

I always covered up my arms,
from when you grabbed them,
with enough force to break something.

I never do anything with my friends,
I always say that I am busy,
they never come over,
I am afraid they might see.

I never do anything right,
you always yell at me,
tell me I don't belong,
wishing I were dead.

If I were dead were would that leave you,
you did the same thing to mom,
that is why she isn't here.

I'm always hurt becuase of you.

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Harsh. Very harsh.

    I wish I could help you with your pain. This made me tingle...

    Big emotion, indeed. Thanks for sharing.


  • mickey94
    November 14, 2008
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    wow, nice, sad though


  • Emms17
    November 13, 2008
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    WOw- deep powerful0 whoa fantastic