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"Once in a While I Smile"

from the fear of me, to the joy of you,
here we are. nothing to gain. nothing to lose.
let's take this chance before it's too late.
let's count the stars,
let's count the stars.
let's pretend that we don't care if this world falls apart.
if this world rips apart,
if this world shreds apart.
because i'll always have you,
and i'll always be here to warm those hands,
and by sundown,
we'll teach this world how to dance.

..and that's how i smile.

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  • Ken-Maverick
    November 21, 2008

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    This is very sweet my friend,
    enjoyed the read

    All the best to you in the contest and thankyou so much for entering

    Ken

  • poetyaknoit
    November 13, 2008
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    i like the repetition of ideas


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    it is good to have a rock
    everyone needs one
    though she is lighter than that obviously...
    but you know what i mean...
    people in our lives who hold our hand and help us conquer
    thanks for this