from the fear of me, to the joy of you,
here we are. nothing to gain. nothing to lose.
let's take this chance before it's too late.
let's count the stars,
let's count the stars.
let's pretend that we don't care if this world falls apart.
if this world rips apart,
if this world shreds apart.
because i'll always have you,
and i'll always be here to warm those hands,
and by sundown,
we'll teach this world how to dance.
..and that's how i smile.
A contest entry
- Swift Something Happy by Ken-Maverick.
2400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is very sweet my friend,
enjoyed the read
All the best to you in the contest and thankyou so much for entering
Ken -
i like the repetition of ideas
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it is good to have a rock
everyone needs one
though she is lighter than that obviously...
but you know what i mean...
people in our lives who hold our hand and help us conquer
thanks for this



