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Killing words

You

S c r e a m

Bullets

 

 

 

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Author notes

Line 1, noun (subject), line 2, verb(action), line 3, noun(object)

In a list

A contest entry

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  • PsychoAnalysis
    November 18, 2008
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    You used really good words to portray this emotion. Loved it!

  • Billbard silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Thank you very much for your entry into my Brevette contest.I was pleased that it took only a few hours
    to close the contest


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    Those are some killer words, very cold.

    Well Done...Best wishes in the contest