A caressing chill
of winter breath whispering
upon silent textures
Transforming creations
mundane interaction of life
into crystal magic
The night glistens
within the enchantment
of frosty dreams
A majestic scene
of pristine bewilderment,
set beneath a wooing moon
A contest entry
- first frost by AJ Morelli.
2700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a lovely piece in the contest
thanks so much darell
al -
this just woo's with the spell of winter's magic...
some find hard to imagine...
well done
Mal
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love ''the winter breath whispering upon silent textures'' very nice
an interesting last stanza..one would have expected pristine wilderness. i like the surprise
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Transforming creations
mundane interaction of life
into crystal magic
i got this the moment i read it. set something off for me. well done, i really enjoyed reading this. much love and respect.
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I agree - the picture you so eloquently worded is excellent. Each stanza sits well on its own and even better entangled with each other.
Good luck
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a lovely
picture painted in the mind's eye of a coming winter..almost made me love the thought of being cold again!!
but i'll still take a sunny day at the beach!!
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Awww ...
This is so sweet and so passionate
Very lovely
Good luck to you!
TT -
This is a lovely write Dear
truly amazing
like always
~LadyLuff~
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Wonderful
Very descriptive and so well expressed. A terrific creation. Best of luck in the contest.
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i love this it would sound so good read out loud because thats how i read it
good luck to you Mr. Howard in the contest
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I love it!! This is truly amazing!! You did such a truly very very beautiful job!! I love the way that you write this is very lovely and well written!! You did a magnificent job!!!
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