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Two as One

When I wake up your the first thing I see
When I fall into slumber your right there with me

Although I cant hold you I feel you inside 

Your already there always right by my side

We have confidence to fly on our own seperate wings

Knowing when we land we share all that love brings

We are two as one................

 

 

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I loved once and will never love that way again....My G

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  • just2write silver member
    August 17

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    Very nicely done.

    I enjoyed reading this poem, packed with emotion and word images of insurpassable love. Nice gentle rhyme scheme that is nearly invisible. Great read, that makes the reader go ahhhh. Just one nit:
    The word 'your' in all instances should be "you're"'.

  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    August 6
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    Very good

    Just lovely and beautiful and a soothing show of love.


  • oOJohnOo
    November 16, 2008

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    Loved the rhyme in this - and then the end cuts you off suddenly and painfully it leaves you wishing for more. Wonderful write.