She moves her position and my cock throbs with excitation
Bodies pumping to the rthymn of hardcore rock music
Her breasts bounce freely as my hands grab and scrape at exposed skin
I make her bleed and scream
She comes down hard again and again
Make me work
Throw her over pin her to the bed
Arse up I plunge into her giving no heed to screams of mercy
Cock exploding
Crescendo of climax
Sweat dripping
Cum all over her sparkling back.
Shes all spent with juices oozing over satin sheets.
A contest entry
- Porn by sheltered.
900 points, ended November 26, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cheater's Club #3-adults only-pre-writes welcome by alaskanamber.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i'm not sure if you took my advice or not
it's been so long since i last read this
but i like it now for sure
maybe i'm just more sober now -
Nice
Ok this was hot but was it on the subject of the contest, cheaters? I would hate to loop cheating and sex into the same category since they are not. Very visual and nice -
a little more story telling than poetry
i think if you axed about a third of the words from this
it could be great
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"throw her over pin her to the bed
arse up i plunge into her giving no heed to screams ofmercy" - ure too cruel hun
"she all spent with juices oozing over satin sheets" - satin sheets r very lucky indeed
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Wow
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