Fucking liars
Fucking lies
Telling people how to live their lives
With or without their consent
If the people consent, it's one thing
If they want lies it's their choice
It's their individual rights
Their freedoms
But when they force it on people
Then they've gone to far
Spreading their cancerous poison
That will eventually self-implode
"The world is ending! The world is ending"
"God's wrath is upon us! Repent!"
That's complete and total bullshit
But what's really sad is that you believe it
I'm not "repenting" for shit
I like being the way I am
I have no intention of changing
And you can't make me
"Thou shalt not kill"
That's what you say
Yet you've killed "in the name of God"
More than any other faith
Hypocrites of faith
Parasites of happiness
Sucking away our lives
Until we're mindless zombies
That's what you want, isn't it?
To be able to control us?
Make us just like you?
Make us "Good Christians"?
Your fucking book's a lie
Genesis is a fucking lie
Your preachings are hypocritical
You're all fucking liars
Well, no more
Get the fuck away from me
I'm not afraid to hurt you
Both physically and mentally
Fuck you all
Fuck you all to your little "Hell"
No, you know what's worse?
Fuck you all to your little "Heaven"
Author notes
Yes, I know that this was a lot like "Liars", but it was written while I was still in the same state of mind, and when I'm like that, my poems and stories tend to come from the same thoughts. I did my best on this, though; I hope you all really enjoy it. Oh, and like I said in the afternote of "Liars", I did not write this to offend religious people...This is merely my opinion.
A contest entry
- 3000 Points For Gold, Rewrite A Famous Historical Lie!!!! by Fenrir Rising.
3100 points, ended November 21, 2008, 13 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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The intensity here is brutal. "I'm not "repenting" for shit". Agreed. I'm a good person, I treat others with due respect, I cause no trouble. I have nothing to "repent". Your last line reminds me of a Robin Williams skit, re he addressing a Fire and Brimstone religious nut on heaven: "Are you going to be there?" If so, it can't be heaven! Wondrous!
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I've seen that skit; it's hilarious! I'm glad you liked the poem!
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This poem will vent hate in some
You do of cause know that you are going to burn in hell, those christian folk will come after you with their little silver crosses, and make you eat your words.lol! Such anger you've portrayed here and I reckon it's better than "Liars", great that you can voice your opinion and not worry about what others might say, it flows well and could almost be a song. Good luck in the contest.
PS. Your username suggest you're a Kiss fan, Saw Kiss twice and they rock.
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I'm glad you liked the poem. And yes...I absolutely love Kiss. You saw them twice? Lucky.
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Very great job and the anger and spite comes through your words like fire through prairie grass, great job
I like how you mention that your not afraid to hurt them, i mean thats got alot more to it then some people think. When you hurt a Christian it's apparently because you rebuke the lord, but when they hurt you it's in the name of god, real nice standard they got there isn't it?
Great job, thanks for entering
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I was glad to enter. I'm glad you liked it.
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