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I shouldnt love you

I shouldnt love you
but I do
Baby you're so bad
It's true
Dont wanna need you
But I do

Your like a virus
that pervades
You make me sick
and it hurts
Baby I need too
Make love to you

You taste so sweet
Too good to eat
Forbidden fruit
But cant resist
Love is a desire
Must I persist

Heartbroken song lines
Written by you
Complicated love binds
Are you really true
Chained by the heartstrings
Stronger than blue

I just shouldn't love you
But I have to
You always hurt me
what you do
Broken and weary
Always need you

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 14, 2008

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    i have someone like that in my life at this moment, i don't want to even like her but i do and more, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • splinteroflight.
    November 13, 2008
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    love it :)

    This poems great
    The struggle of loving someone who always seems to hurt you is never easy, and this poem shows that clearly&without a doubt.
    The line about "forbidden fruit" is also very good, as metaphorically it means that so is the person whom you love.
    Good luck
    <3<3<3