I shouldnt love you
but I do
Baby you're so bad
It's true
Dont wanna need you
But I do
Your like a virus
that pervades
You make me sick
and it hurts
Baby I need too
Make love to you
You taste so sweet
Too good to eat
Forbidden fruit
But cant resist
Love is a desire
Must I persist
Heartbroken song lines
Written by you
Complicated love binds
Are you really true
Chained by the heartstrings
Stronger than blue
I just shouldn't love you
But I have to
You always hurt me
what you do
Broken and weary
Always need you
A contest entry
- I shouldn't love you; But I want to. by splinteroflight..
550 points, ended November 14, 2008, 20 entries
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Comments
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i have someone like that in my life at this moment, i don't want to even like her but i do and more, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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love it :)
This poems great
The struggle of loving someone who always seems to hurt you is never easy, and this poem shows that clearly&without a doubt.
The line about "forbidden fruit" is also very good, as metaphorically it means that so is the person whom you love.
Good luck
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