i.
Playfully tickling
the nape of your neck
Clinging to your waist
to hold you close
I beg you to love me
and to call me your own
Desperately needing
your every touch
Basking in your scent
as I pull you closer
Your legs dangling free
as you slowly begin to moan
Grant me my wish
and let me take you home
Though I could sit here forever
holding you in my arms
ii.
Your breath upon my skin
teasing my senses
Caressing my breasts
and driving me insane
Please my memories
as I swallow you whole
I crave your words
as it's the last thing I'll hear
Take me to another place
where we can be alone
You are my everything
my reason for being
My home ...
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt..... Sensual by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 4, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow. This was heartbreaking. I loved it. You did a fantastic job. My favorite part would be the second stanza. I loved this. Congratulations on your honorable mention.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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A very beautiful piece
Very sensual and romantic
well penned -
this was sensual and romantic, and yet it had a longing feel to it that went deeper.. I really loved this. thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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oh lala this certainly gave me great images to
carry me through my day.
Well done.
Delila
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I like this...I almost used the term "nape of my neck" somewhere in my poem...glad i didn't, you used it better. I like the idea of seeing both sides of this "love making" very creative and sensual ~
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