wild eyed and purrs
followed within that breath of hearing
where memories are found
jealous of the silence
and I smile
as elusive shadows reign in the back of my mind
gentle touches
reach into the seasons
as sunshine
pushes through the clouds
encounters made
when least expected
and I find myself
learning to trust
after years of pain
though as I look back at it
I realize
it made me strong
in the road within life.
Please tell me what you think
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emotionally exquisite! Good job!
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Veryu good piece. You really made it feel emotional and real. Great job with the penning! An A+ job with word usage and everything. Keep up the great work! I will be looking forward to reading and commenting on more of your work soon. i hope that you can get the chance to COMMENT back on my work, seeing as how I am sure that you and I take the same amount of love and put it into each and every piece that we write! Thanks so much for the share and again, a brilliant write!
THANKS SO MUCH!
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subtle, gentle , sublime
beautiful poem,
subtle gentle and sublime,
thanks for sharing ,
best wishes,
Isabella -
I liked the lines: jealous of the silence, and the part about elusive shadows. You use alot of words I seem to really have an affinity for, like shattered in your other poem...elusive, I like. Yay, I liked this alot.
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Future meets the past
in the presence of the now
Hindsight's 20/30
but still we wonder how
Past eclipses future
in the chore to understand
Those circumstances garnished
with the touch of not our hand
Sometimes life unwinds like a ball of yarn
playful and lightly and yet at other times
it is a hammer to the soul.
We can't let past rule our future forever
so we sometimes just have to dust ourselves off
and start anew...
Eddy
The gremlins were in your keyboard again...typos at line 7
and4h from end
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