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Road to AP: Ylova

While traveling to a place they call AP,
Everyone says it is a site to see.

I met a beauty, that shined like a star.
She said she had traveled very far.
Ylova, was the name of this traveler,
She as a fantasy chronicler.
she brought the wonders of the sages,
passed down throughout the ages.

On your path, she said with a gentle tone,
You will see many things
no man’s ever been shown.
Your eyes will see and 
your mind will doubt;
But, you must stay true
to your route.
She handed me a book,
to keep track of all I would see.
Then, she told me next
to visit the silk tree.
As I left, she faded into the light,
And when she was gone
the sky turned to night. 

Author notes

Ylova, i have just met this poetic beauty and i am already enchanted by her words. Her poems seem to have a life of their own. They are rich with emotion, fantasy, things that just make a poem to me come to life. She is a kind and very strong person, who i have grown (in the short time knowing her) to be fond of, she is a wonderful person and poet, and that is why i choose her to be the second person i meet on this road to Ap. Ylova, i how this did some justice for you, keep it flowing.

I am not saying who is next

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  • Bob Fox
    October 23

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    Poet

    I do know of Ylova and she is indeed an envhanting lady and fine poet. I am sure she appreciates this great dedication.. Well penned poet.


  • ScentOfCinnamon
    February 11

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    Tch. Way to make a girl jealous, lol. Just joking around with ya'.
    This poem is... phenomenal. Slight rhyme, beautiful words, enchanting meaning and flow and... god, this poem about Ylova rocked so much that I think I'm going to check her poetry out. If you take this sort of time and energy and write something so wonderful about her and her work, she's got to be the bomb.
    Awesome poem, Aaron. I'm using my last applaud of the day on you!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    Beautifully Intoxicating!!!

    I'm sure Ylova absolutely loves this tribute to her muse's creative talents!! She is a wonderful poetess!! As you always say, keep it flowing... Peace always, xx Cyn xx


  • Myth Of Twilight
    December 5, 2008

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    yo swwet write i loved the work it spoke of alot and ide like to check that out this read was amazing and i think i need to read more great work again not to bad i gess


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    I have never read this poetess!
    Wonderful idea you have here.....and let's us journey
    with you...to enjoy these inspiring poets!
    great idea!
    ears/Seattle sis


  • Have left the stage gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    i'm sure there are other lights here, but hey, some are unreplaceable, sad this but dont be too dejeced, yes>?


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    This is another beautiful dedication!
    This site is filled with so many brilliant minds and it's a great place to meet and share our artistic talents together. It is a wonderful road to be on everyday! Well done!




    Jeremy0826


  • Stuart Higginson gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    You're right to relate to AP to being a road ... it offers journeys for all. We've all been through change, growth, and a plethora of experiences since our feet first set forth, and we meet others who are undertaking a likened pilgrimage worldwide on this path. Days are miles. Our memories and friendships alike go forth with us, and we leave our footprints behind in the form of poems

    Stu


  • x-Valiant-x
    November 19, 2008
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    wow.


  • Desire gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Ooooooh~

    Oh My this is a Beautiful piece penned~
    Love the images You created in this Dedication along with energy exuded~ I have not read this person's work but You have Inspired the Mind to take a walk over to her page
    I imagine that special someone smiling~
    Also I Appreciate Your comment on my work
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Antipodi
    November 18, 2008
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    an excellent dedication to another poet lots of great imagery and flow


  • JinSays gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    She's my lovely Ap daughter, and I love and admire her dearly. Her poems are so colorful and full of fire. She's an amzing person who really cares about her friends, and has nothing but good things to say about anyone.
    I think this is a wonderful testament to her, and I know she loved it too. Did she see it before she left, I wonder? I could scroll down, but I'll just probably guess she did.
    Wonderful she write, this is as beautful as she.
    Love,
    jin


  • penman gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Such a great choice of words. Thank you so much for sharing.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Aww this is lovely! She is a precious soul indeed and you've penned a very fitting dedication to her


  • Amera gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    This is a beautiful dedication; you have a wonderful way of expressing admiration in an original way.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    I love her, too. She is a beautiful soul and a poetess that inspires. I really am digging your poetry - Love, Lane


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    November 15, 2008
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    THIS IS FABULOUS, AND VERY CLEVERLY CRAFTD.
    YOUR EYES WILL SEE
    YOUR MIND WILL DOUBT
    BUT YOU MUST STAY TRUE TO YOUR ROUTE
    HOW PROLIFIC.EACH POET HAS THEIR OWN UNIQUE ROUTE TO FOLLOW, IN THEIR SEARCH FOR SELF EXPRESSION.YOU PENNED THIS SO WELL.THANKS FOR SHARING,AND FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS ON MY WORK
    LITTLEFISHONE


  • Swan song gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    better be careful dude you will get twitterpated lol
    Excellent tribute !


    • Amera gold member
      November 17, 2008
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      Someone may be trying to twitterpate you Jeff.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Wow, love the ending, those last three lines are awesome, they add a mystical air to this. Wicked write hun, I can see she likes it Not even a hint of who's next..? Spoil sport Keep em coming!


  • Alyzeh
    November 14, 2008

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    Awwww..this is so sweet! Ylova is an amazing person indeed! You did an excellent job! Great work! =)


  • Angelflower
    November 14, 2008

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    aww this is really beautiful and sweet. such a lovely story you have woven here.I have read some of her writes and they are truly beautiful and moving. You did such a wonderful job. Thank you very much for sharing.


    Angel


  • Meroza
    November 13, 2008

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    Tee hee! My crazy, hyper cousin sure is something out of the ordinary. And I agree, her poems has they're own way of comming to life, I wish I knew how she did that.

    A great write, and a beautiful dedication!


  • chilali
    November 13, 2008

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    I love the background to Purple!

  • chilali
    November 13, 2008
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    Omg! I think I am going to cry! My eyes are watering. Hehe. I love this and you are waaayy to sweet and kind! And aahh! Aaron Thank you! I think I will share my fries with you now Hehehe. Thank you once again! So very much for this! It truly was a surprise worth waiting for! I am so bookmarking this right now! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you

    Much , much love
    Ylova

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