Every comment I make
you take as an opportunity
to bait an arguement
Everything I do
to better our lives
recieves criticism
Every idea I have
for making money
I am told is stupid
Every arguement
makes me hurt
in ways indescribable
Every day I hope
the future holds
peace, tranquility and happiness
for us both
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I hope peace and tranquility will definitely come soon, it always does, like the sunshine after the rain. This was from the heart and I could feel it. You both will find a way to wrok things out and understand each other. God bless,
Love and light,
Lencio
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I can understand this one completely. The only thing that I can suggest is that you try to look at the reasons she acts the way she does and what you do that provokes this response when you have the best of intentions in mind. Talk it over with her. If she understands, she will come around. But, remember. you will probably have to have numerous talks.
The poetry that you both write expresses love and caring. I think you may do all right. You have my very best wishes.
Mike
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I hope you can find a way to work things out together. Good poem Shane!
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Great
I wish nothing but the best for the both of you. Times get tough I know but together you will get through! This poem shows that you are trying Shane and I commended you and give you kudos for that. Everything aint all roses remember that!
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I am glad I clicked this as this comes from within and showing we are only human,we are individuals and are unique in many ways,Hazel
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omg!! this poem has to be the best poem i have read so far. keep on rocking
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i think its more that we have different ideas, ideals, values and ideas... the idea of making you hurt is probably more painful for me than the hurt i cause you. i totally agree with the last verse... i know things have not been good lately... lets look toward a brighter future... i do love you even when we fight,
forever and a day,
your wife,
georgie,
xxx
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