My heart’s pounding
Not quite a race
But how can you not hear it
As I hold you close
My hands are shaking
What nerves now?!
I don’t know
But you don’t seem to notice
How everything works wrong
Even when everything is right
Your tender touch
The crush of your lips on mine
The erotic dance of our tongues
First you lead then me
I want to surrender myself to you
But I’m torn
At the same time I want to take you as mine
Stay here forever
Wrapped in your arms
Your body pressed up against mine
As my hand trace down your body
My every dream coming alive
Your taste
So unique
So new
So intoxication
Lost in a moment
With no sense of time
How long was it
A second
A minute
A hour
My life?
I wouldn’t know
Time stands still when I’m with you
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Quote by Betting Roses.
400 points, ended December 10, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very nice! A little different aproach to what every one else took to my contest and I like it. The flow is a little off but it didn't hurt it all that much. I like from line 27 down best i think. my only problem was in line 26 intoxication is in the wrong form.
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