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Not Today

dont know what to say
Im so far away
missing you is all thats on my mind
thinking of you i feel so blind
waiting again to see your face
holding on to your every embrace
you are my everything and i feel you slipping away
I wont let you fade, not today

be honest

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  • i love it but who might it be for? man i miss you i haven't come over yet haven't found time to get away from mom feels like the collors on to tight well i love you so much baby girl and don't forget us my fav person every!?!


  • mcope8050
    April 16
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    i've been here and you conveyed the emotions very nicely,,, thanks for sharing,,,, MICHAEL


  • samantha jean
    November 13, 2008
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    "you are my everything and i feel you slipping away" This is probably the worst feeling in the world. Someone who you believe is your whole world, or who you love very much fading away. Powerful write.
    Really made me think about my own emotions, and yours as well.