Virgin Snow

New snow has broke ground

over the bridge through out lands,

vacated the silence buds imbound

early as frost cut short growth hands.

memory serves in carved frost flowers

but impatients left the child sledding

each hilltop of virgin snow shower,

ripped boards across snow shedding.

Author notes

Promp: November~acrostic

November Acrostics Contest by Barbara. 550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

By me, right now

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cindyloo
November 15, 2008
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Very nice. Love it all but think "each hilltop of virgin snow shower" is brilliant.
Barbara
November 13, 2008

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Interesting poem. Nicely shows the impatience that both children and the weather can have in the month of November.
One thing, though....One of the rules was 'Don't use the word 'November' in your title'.

Thank you for entering, and good luck in the contest.
- saddie23
  November 13, 2008
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  Thank you
  Thank you for pointing that out to me. I thought had put the word in the author's note untill you caught my mistake. Sorry, lol. Saddie23