Drawing higher in this race
My fate is clear enough to trace
I wait a while and look at you
But I never knew if it were true
Desperately I want you near
But now I know it was there so clear
I love you, but now you see
Your love is my misery
Its fate that draws us together
But then again its wrong remember
It was forbidden from the start
We both loved to much to dart
now we wait 'or the slumber
Till night and day become one together
Were silent 'or the graves
Now we wait together and write the struggle.
Of love so lost...
That there is no more
And one day again
We'll find it will end.
A contest entry
- I shouldn't love you; But I want to. by thegreengirl.
550 points, ended November 14, 2008, 20 entries
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This is great, I love it lots
I love the line "Were silent 'or the graves,"
I also love "Your love is my misery"
It's very lyrical
Well done&good luck
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