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I Shouldn't Love You, But I Do

I shouldn't love you but I want to
I shouldn't love you but I care
You make my heart beat loud and fast
Each time I see you standing there

So why do I just love you
Why not tell you that I care
Maybe we have a lot in common
So much love and life to share

So my darling tell me
Do you love me true
Am I just imagining you love me
For I love you darling only you

I shouldn't love you but I want to
I do love you with all my heart
My darling please say you love me too
May we never ever part

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  • Purush
    November 13, 2008

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    words embrace a quality verse.

    "I shouldn't love you but I want to
    I do love you with all my heart
    My darling please say you love me too
    May we never ever part "
    lovely expressed. the words embrace a quality verse.
    kudos


    • Katie Lazette
      November 14, 2008
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      Thank you Purush. I always appreciate hearing from you and your kind comments.






  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    this is so romantic and needing, i can feel all your surge of emotion K.. HOPE YOU WIN GOLD.X


  • splinteroflight.
    November 13, 2008

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    Love it :)

    Fxcking love it!
    The questioning style in the poem really works!
    &The repition of "I shouldn't love you but I want to" at the beginning and end work really well
    Good luck
    <3<3<3

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