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The Ghost In My Heart

When you enter the room
my world comes to a halt
forbidden love
is it my fault?

that i want to be in ya arms
and love with all I got?
how can hide my feelings
and pretend to be what I'm not

how guilty i feel
knowing that you're taken
but, if you think this lessens the urge
you're sadly mistaken

why must you plague my mind
and smile so innocently
and give me false hopes
of being with you potentially

if you only knew
how i struggle to breath
I'm so in love with you
cant you see?

The moment I saw you
I was doomed from the start
how can I see, but never truly feel
the ghost in my heart


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  • splinteroflight.
    November 13, 2008

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    wowowowowowa!

    This is lovely, such an in depth emotion rollercoaster!
    I know exactly how this feels,
    [&You've conveyed it perfectly in the poem]
    Good luck!
    <3<3<3